Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed by
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have become more
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and we can simplify these situations without technology. I mostly disagree with
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statement because the main aim
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developments are for
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to facilitate their
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and
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, our burden would have
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against duties and nature.
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, opposite the view
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, technology has been developing for weakening and reducing
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’s responsibility in life.
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adaptation to new innovations is a compulsive process for some, these developments have been made for assisting to solve individuals’ issues in every part of their
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. To illustrate that,
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have become a considerable assistance
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our duties
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as communication, calculation and exploration
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information.
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can figure out their many transitions easily by these
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as cars, buses and trucks have taken an important role to ease transportation and civilization.
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, these improvements are relieving our standards rather than being complex.
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, without these technologies,
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’s circumstances would not be better than
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individuals’
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would increase. In case of closing some systems and
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,
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should do their automated
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for freezing and
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maintain their foods in conventional ways.
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,
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may deprive
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communication
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as watching television and calling their relatives. In short, without
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,
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would be in trouble in terms of dealing
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their work and communication. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with
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some technologies create bewildering problems
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their
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first times, in my opinion, they facilitate our
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in their
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advancement and without them, our
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would become more complex. 45 dk.
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