You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well and are in good spirits. I am writing

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letter to tell you that I am planning to visit your town next month. I booked my flight and my flight number is AC007. On 2nd December,I will be at the airport on

sunday

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Sunday

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morning nearby at 2:00 o'clock. I am arriving

your

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in your

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town for my business purposes and will stay for only two weeks. I want to stay in your house if you do not mind. As I did not have a better experience in staying hotel. I feel more isolated and most importantly miss the home-made food.

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why, I prefer to stay in your home and try to spend some time with your family as well. I urge you to provide me

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peaceful area where I can easily handle my business meetings and concentrate on my work properly. I will pay for the period which I will stay off in your house and

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for the meal which you will serve me. I follow

strict

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dietery

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dietary

routine

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eat

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only vegetarian food with fewer spices and

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consuming

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vegan products. Please pick me up from the airport on that day. Hope to hear back from you soon! Warm Regards, Jazz.

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Ensure consistent verb tenses throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Improve sentence structure for better flow.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear and polite greeting and closing.

task achievement

The tone is friendly and appropriate for writing to a relative.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
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