Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. Describe the gift. Tell how it will be delivered. Explain why you chose it.

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Dear John, How're you? I hope

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letter finds you in good health and spirits. I'm writing

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letter to hear happy news from our school friend. Recently, you've shifted to a new house in London and I think, you need some things to decorate the house. So, I've decided to give an adorable statue to the place.

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, I planned to buy the statue for your apartment because you are fond of collecting distinct types of sculptures. I know, you are finding a Laughing Buddha statue to decorate the home.

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, I would like to deliver that gift from Johnson who is moving to your area next week. All in all, I chose that present as it's a symbol of happiness. Whenever you will see the gift, you will be remembered the happy situation

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helps to forget your worries.

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, it assists to enhance the beauty of your house. I hope to see you soon. Warm wishes, Eva.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

165 words

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