The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of producing instant noodles
Overall
, the process
comprises a number of steps, beginning with flour being delivered to the silos, and ending with the final products being labelled and sealed.
At the beginning of the process
, the flour is transported and pumped into the tower silos for storage. Next,
the flour is put in the mixer where it is mixed with water and oil, with the next step involving the mixture being rolled to create dough sheets. Subsequently
, the sheets go through a machine where it is separated into strips.
The process
continues with the dough strips being shaped into discs, and then
these discs are deep-fried with cooking oil before being dried. After that, dried noodles are packed into cups with some small packages of spices and vegetables. At the final stage of the process
, these cups of noodles are labelled and sealed and ready for being sold to consumers.Submitted by lamgiangta2005 on
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