Nowadays in many countries people are following the latest fashion, hairstyle and so on. Why are they so influenced by fashion? Is it a positive or negative development?

People

all over the world are following the latest

fashion’s

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fashions

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extensively to keep up with the trend of

modern

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age. There are plenty

personal

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and social reasons for influencing folks to do so. In my perspective, the disadvantages of

this

approach excel its advantages. Generally speaking, there are two main

reason

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why

people

are so obsessed with

newest

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fashion

trends. One of the main reasons for

people

being attached to

this

matter is because of public

advertisement

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advertisements

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where

fashion

designers use celebrities whom

people

admire. A good illustration of

this

is that many renowned brands hire famous

people

as their

model

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models

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, which makes their income more profitable as

people

follow their role

model

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models

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.

For example

, Louis Vuitton has employed famous football

player

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, Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi, to advertise their latest fashionable products.

As a consequence

, these

player’s

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fans around the world tend to buy from

this

brand, which has almost doubled its sale.

This

shows how the

fashion

industries draw out the attention of

people

to buy new items by using the popularity of

well-know

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celebrities.

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,

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individuals believe that wearing fashionable items makes them look smart, so they dress

according to

the newest trends.

In other words

, folks wear

fashion

products to represent

them

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themselves

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in a good looking.

However

, the trend to follow the latest

fashion

models has several negative

effect

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. The first drawback of buying branded wearables is that they are highly expensive which puts customers

into

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under

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financial pressure.

For Instance

, the average price of a formal belt is around 30 dollars

while

Louis

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Vuitton belt cannot be bought

less

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for less

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than 100 dollars.

In addition

,

people

follow

fashion

trends in clothes in order to look updated and

this

is where they limit their freedom to decide how they appear and

this

is how

fashion

industries

chooses

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our outlook. In conclusion,

Although

fashion

has a major impact on how

people

dress, it

also

puts economic pressure on them and

limit

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limits

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their freedom.