There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter: Describe the problems Explain how these problems are affecting the public Suggest some changes that could be made Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jake Paul and I'm currently living in Kandy city and I am writing
this
letter to inform you that we are experiencing very bad public transport service in our city. Let me explain the situation here,
firstly
the timetables posted at the Bus stops are inaccurate and buses are never arriving on time.
in addition
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bus drivers behave very badly whenever we try to get any kind of information.
furthermore
, the roads are damaged
due to
the rain and repair and Maintenace is not in place yet. Kindly look into
this
matter and as a loyal ,citizen I would like to request to give proper training to all drivers
as well as
could you please install a digital timetable
instead
of the posted ones as it will be a great benefit to the people for time-saving.
also
if possible please send
and
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person who
in
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charge of the road maintenance and repair for the inspection, thank you for your attention and kind cooperation. Yours faithfully, Jake Paul
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