In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I agree with the statement that in contemporary society,everyone should have equal opportunities in education.,
,
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However
I do not think that it is a must for every university subject to accept equal numbers of male and female students.
Every human has the right to receive a good education and to be compatible in the market.Add a comma
,However
Accordingly
,everybody has different interests and talents.,Usually men
and women
have different desires and skills.Women
are more creative and men
are more practical.Therefore
,there are some jobs which are mostly for men
such
as engineering,cosmonaut and pilot,also
there is
job positions which Change the verb form
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are
women
such
as designers, teachers and psychologists.In this
,case it is not a good idea to have equal numbers of males and females in these subjects.Of ,course women
can work in many fields and nowadays there are a lot of examples of that men
can also
be designers and teachers.In contemporary ,society there are no men
and women
jobs,but there are differences between women
and man
brains,so some positions are more suitable for Fix the agreement mistake
men
men
and others for a woman.Not all men
would like to study some degree which is preferred by mostly women
and vice versa.Consequently
,some subjects can't contain equal numbers of women
and men
.
In conclusion, I think that every person has the right to choose whatever will make him happy and the subject which is passion and talent.But I don't think that every subject is for everybody.It depends on the preferences.Submitted by borqnaatanasova94 on
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