Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

Dear Mr Ching, I am writing to express some of my concerns about the house that I rent in
last
week and I would like you to solve the problems before my family and I move into it. My family and I visited the house again yesterday and we discovered two major problems.
Firstly
, there is a serious security problem in your house. The lock of the main door was broken and some of the windows which are located in the living could not be properly closed.
Also
, the
air-conditioner
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that was installed in the bedroom was out of order. As summer is coming and the temperature may raise extremely
due to
heat waves, we need to ensure that it can function well. As my family and I are planning to move in on the 30th of July,which is 2 weeks later, I would appreciate it if you can fix the door, replace some of the windows with the new ones and hire an electronic technician to repair the air-conditioner by the end of next week. I hope that those problems could be resolved as soon as possible and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Thomas Chu
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