Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

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Dear John Nicolson I am really dissatisfied with the flat condition in which we have just moved. It's been 15 days since we have shifted to your flat . there are numerous issues we are facing in the flat. The flat doesn't have a proper

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supply . the frequency of

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supply is poor and inconsistent. because

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that our daily routine is affected. ,

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the

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supply is inconsistent. At night times

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outages are happening on daily basis. My kids are not able to study properly.

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I am requesting you to please fix

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issue on an urgent basis. please get in touch with society chairman to discuss

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and

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issue, we are not able to complete our daily routine.So please address these issues on a priority basis.

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if required try to get new

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connection from government authorities. looking forward to a quick reply from you. Yours sincerely David Johnson

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.

Write about the following topic: Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?