The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates a Brandfield
city
where two alternative sites are supposed to be built for a shopping mall.
Overall
, the first location S1 is in the north of the city
, whilst the other one S2 is in the south. Even though both are near the city
centre and the railway, differences are found.
First,
S1 has chosen to be in the north between the road and the river. If S1 has been built, it will be easy for residents in the housing estate to approach it. Also
, it will not be far from the city
centre. Although
the golf course and the park will be far away from it, S1 can be reached by car using the road or with water transportation - if there is any – using the river.
On the other hand
, S2 the second site – which will be located in the extreme south- will be between the road and the railway, so it will be close to the city
centre and the industrial estate. Whilst housing state will be out of the way.Submitted by alasfar.maram on
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