In many countries people live longer and longer. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages.

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this

era,

due to

advance

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in technology,

people

now live longer than they did in the past decades. From my personal view, when

people

live longer, they

able

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to transfer their

tradition

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traditions

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to next the generations but

this

case will

increased

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the number of populations.

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essay will

further

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benefits,

drawbacks

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and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. In regard to the benefit of longer life expectancy,

people

able

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to pass their cultural traditions to

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the youngster

a youngster

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as what their

anchestor

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ancestors

ancestor

did

previuosly

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previously

. Since older

people

have more

experiences

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and knowledge compared to

young

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the young

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generation, the traditions can be kept for a long

perod

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period

of time .

For example

, older

people

can transfer

the

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knowledge regarding traditional dances, local recipes,

cultural

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and cultural

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outfits and

also

sometimes tell us about historical stories of

brave

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army

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in the past era.

Therefore

, society

able

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to learn about their belonging and increase their patriotism spirit.

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks

of

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this

issue. As

people

becoming

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older, they might not have a strong

body

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and energy as

adult

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community. They

also

suffer

with

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many diseases

such

as diabetes, heart disease and

athsma

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asthma

due to

age factors.

Therefore

, families and government have to spend a lot of money

in

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providing healthcare and insurance for aged

people

.

For instance

, in Malaysia,

a

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reseach

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research

has shown that the number of old folk's

home

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increase significantly in the

last

ten years to

accomodate

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accommodate

senior

citizen

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citizens

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in the country. In the nutshell,

live

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longer are good to deliver our cultural tradition to our child

however

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, it cost

people

with

high

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the high

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cost of living and medicine

due to

illness.

Therefore

, governments and communities can do many things to deal with

this

situation.