In many countries people live longer and longer. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages.

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advance

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in technology,

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now live longer than they did in the past decades. From my personal view, when

people

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live longer, they

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to transfer their

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to next the generations but

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the number of populations.

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benefits,

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will lead to a logical conclusion. In regard to the benefit of longer life expectancy,

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able

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to pass their cultural traditions to

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as what their

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did

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previously

. Since older

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have more

experiences

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and knowledge compared to

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generation, the traditions can be kept for a long

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period

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, older

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can transfer

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knowledge regarding traditional dances, local recipes,

cultural

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and cultural

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outfits and

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sometimes tell us about historical stories of

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in the past era.

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, society

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to learn about their belonging and increase their patriotism spirit.

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, there are some drawbacks

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issue. As

people

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older, they might not have a strong

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and energy as

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community. They

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suffer

with

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many diseases

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as diabetes, heart disease and

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asthma

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age factors.

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, families and government have to spend a lot of money

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providing healthcare and insurance for aged

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.

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, in Malaysia,

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has shown that the number of old folk's

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increase significantly in the

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ten years to

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accommodate

senior

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in the country. In the nutshell,

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longer are good to deliver our cultural tradition to our child

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however

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, it cost

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with

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cost of living and medicine

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illness.

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, governments and communities can do many things to deal with

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situation.