The chart below give information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summaries information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below give information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summaries information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The chart illustrates data on family expenses from their weekly income in a nation in 1968 and in 2018.
Overall
, some graph details fluctuate
whereas
some other graphs remain the same.
According to
the information,
firstly
, food was the highest payment in 1968.
However
, it fell dramatically from 35% to 17% in 2018. Similar to clothing and footwear dropped significantly from 10% to 5%. Next is personal goods which decreased greatly from 8% to 4%.
On the other hand
, from 1968 to 2018 Leisure shot up sharply from 9% to 23% which is approximately a 14% difference.
Moreover
, housing rose from 10% to 19 %
as well as
transportation climbed from 9% to 14%. Based on the ratio data, there was only one category that kept the same amount of expenditure
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household food which is at 9% in both years.
Finally
, the lowest payment in 2018 are fuel and power, and personal goods which were 4%.
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