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In recent years television has contributed most to changing people's quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It has been argued by many individuals that a few years ago TV was playing an essential role in
people
's lives and it has changed their way of living. I partially agree with
this
 given statement and
this
 essay shall shed light upon my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs
along with
 a reasoned conclusion. Foremost, the prominent cause behind my agreement is that watching TV transformed the lifestyle of many
people
. In
this
 modern era, the majority of
people
 prefer to watch television whenever they have spare time rather than take part in outdoor activities and it puts not only an adverse impact on
people
's well-being but
also
 their mental health as they spend lots of time on it without doing exercises.
Consequently
, they might face obesity, back pain, weak eyesight and various types of heart diseases. Paradoxically, the prominent ground behind my disagreement is that the population would acquire different nations of cultures and get news about what is going on around the globe or in their native land. Most human beings have more knowledge about the other parts of countries tradition and
also
 know languages of foreign
as well as
 aware from daily news.
For instance
, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that 90% of humans are expending their most of time watching television with
the
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assistance of
this
 they have got authentic information from it and
also
 know about the latest heritage of other regions.
To conclude
,
although
 it puts a detrimental effect on health, there are some benefits
such
 as it provides acknowledgement regarding modern festivals and breaking news.
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