Write a letter to your friend to thank for holidays and photoes and invite them

Dear Pawan, I'm Writing

this

letter to say thank you for the wonderful time we spent together in Niagara Falls for a couple of weeks. It was a great time we enjoyed ourselves a lot at different places

such

as Skylon tower, Niagara sky wheel and the most amazing Zipline where we captured a lot of pictures.The picture which I like the most was when we went to see the journey behind the falls.

Moreover

, I would like to apologize for not writing earlier.

Last

year, I had a caesarean section and the stitches healed well, but suddenly I got severe pain

due to

this

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had to be hospitalized for a couple of weeks.,Anyway my body is recovered now ,and I'm missing all of you .it will be great if you guys visit my house and spend some time.I will wait for your reply.see you soon. Best regards, Navjot Kaur

Submitted by navjotguri on Thu Mar 23 2023

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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