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Many young people are leaving their home in rural area to study or work in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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In
this
 era of globalisation, more youngsters have
leave
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 their home town to pursue their studies or work in the urban
areas
. From my personal point of view, the main reasons are because cities provide
a
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better facilities and job opportunities compared to
small
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a small
the small
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town
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towns
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.
This
 essay will
further
 elaborate
the
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on the
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 benefits and drawbacks of
such
situation
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a situation
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. The first and foremost advantage of living in the
city
 is that it offers
people
 with
variety
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a variety
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 of amenities which
helps
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help
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people
 to develop their skills and knowledge.
Due to
 advances in technology and better learning equipment,
conurbantion
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conurbation
conurbations
 gives an excellent education system.
For example
, in
countryside
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the countryside
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, universities are rarely found
due to
small
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the small
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 numbers of
populations
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population
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.
Moreover
,
metropolis
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metropolia
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 become
main
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the main
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areas
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area
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 for postgraduates who
looking
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after
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for
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 job vacancies, as
lot
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 of companies or small businesses are
establish
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 there.
Consequently
, all these help to level up the standard of living and pursue the dream career of a person.
On the other hand
, there
are
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 some
drawback
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drawbacks
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 to
this
 development. One of the cons is it gives economic downturn to
remote
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the remote
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territory
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territories
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. As more
people
 migrate to the
city
, it will reduce the
economic
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 of
isolated
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the isolated
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area
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areas
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 because limited numbers of skilled
people
 contribute to
the
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rural's development. To cite an example, research has shown that the majority of
people
 who suffer
with
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from
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 serious illness travel to
city
areas
bacause
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because
 the medical equipment are modern and more professional doctors
available
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are available
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 for
chronical
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chronic
 health issues.
Thus
, all these benefits
are
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lead the rural communities
like
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apply
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to shift to the town. In the nutshell,
city
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the city
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 area provided
a
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apply
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better job opportunities and facilities for
people
 to pursue their
career
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careers
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 or studies.
However
,
this
 gives a negative
impacts
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impact
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econmic
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economic
 of
rural
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the rural
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 side as more talented parties move to modern
area
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areas
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.
Therefore
, the authorities and communities should encourage society in
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an
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effort to balance both
areas
.
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