Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree with this view?

It is often argued that funding

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arts

by

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is a

wastage

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of money and

this

could be utilized better if it is expanded in another sector. I completely agree with

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statement and think that at

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we should fulfil

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fundamental rights. Generally speaking, expenditure on art cannot provide

much benefit

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for the people of a

country

,

on the other hand

, there are many individuals who cannot meet up with their demands and live below the poverty line. In that case, rather than spending on

arts

, we should focus on people's

lifestyle

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, in order to ensure them a prosperous life.

For example

, Bangladesh is a developing and poor

country

, whose majority of citizens are destitute in number. So if it focuses on

arts

, the inhabitants of

this

country

will have to starve.

Moreover

, there is another reason why I support

this

idea. To illustrate

this

, in my perspective, the government should spend its budget

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educational programs than spending in

arts

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. We all know that education is the backbone of a nation. That's why, we should try our best to educate the illiterates because in many countries, thousands of peoples

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get the opportunity to study and

as a result

, they remain in darkness, which is regarded as a curse for that

country

.

On the contrary

, art is a form of entertainment. I think we cannot ignore people's basic rights like education and give priority to

arts

, as entertainment is just a desire, not a need.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that there are many significant things like the removal of illiteracy and poverty rather than

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of enjoyment. That's why, in my opinion, the government must notice needs not

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and it is the reason to support the given statement.