Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that teachers have played a crucial role in

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and social growth of the young when they start school, rather than their parents. In my opinion, I agree with

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statement and I will

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discuss

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phenomenon. On the one hand, since juveniles spend most of their time at

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, they will develop intellectual and social development. To put it

further

, once they start school, they are required to study a variety of fundamental subjects.

Moreover

, various activities help promote their motor

skills

and communication

skills

such

as puzzles, assignments,

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works.

For example

, most Thai students have better social interactions with their peers in modern classrooms, compared to

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traditional ones.

Therefore

, academic and social

skills

can be educated by teachers more than

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fathers and mothers.

On the other hand

, most

children

tend to be less academic and irresponsible when they are at

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.

This

is because, they are more relaxed with their families, as they are not required to perform certain educational activities, compared to

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environment. Not only because

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unmotivating environment but parents

also

sometimes do not have time to encourage the

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of their

offsprings

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.

For instance

, most Thais families are less likely to help

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children

's

homeworks

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, which

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in many problems with their responsibility.

As a result

of

this

,

children

should be more motivated to get involved in extra educational

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at

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.

To conclude

, it is believed by many that school teachers are more influenced

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students than their parents when it comes to educating them at

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. I am opinion

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that the more

children

spend with their masters, the better their academic and social

skills

would be.