Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that teachers have played a crucial role in

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and social growth of the young when they start school, rather than their parents. In my opinion, I agree with

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phenomenon. On the one hand, since juveniles spend most of their time at

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, they will develop intellectual and social development. To put it

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, once they start school, they are required to study a variety of fundamental subjects.

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, various activities help promote their motor

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and communication

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as puzzles, assignments,

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works.

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, most Thai students have better social interactions with their peers in modern classrooms, compared to

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traditional ones.

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, academic and social

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can be educated by teachers more than

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fathers and mothers.

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, most

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tend to be less academic and irresponsible when they are at

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.

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is because, they are more relaxed with their families, as they are not required to perform certain educational activities, compared to

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environment. Not only because

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unmotivating environment but parents

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sometimes do not have time to encourage the

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of their

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.

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, most Thais families are less likely to help

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children

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, which

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in many problems with their responsibility.

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of

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,

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should be more motivated to get involved in extra educational

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at

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, it is believed by many that school teachers are more influenced

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students than their parents when it comes to educating them at

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that the more

children

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spend with their masters, the better their academic and social

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would be.