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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

#people #music #cultures #ages
In the modern
world
,
music
 plays a vital role in
people
's lives, so some
people
 believe
music
 has a significant role in gathering
individuals
 from all over the
world
 regardless of their traditional or age groups. I completely agree with
this
 statement and the reasons will be discussed in the following paragraph.
To begin
 with , the main reason why
music
 can help
people
 to be together is that it can be expressed and understood by any
individuals
 around the
world
.As we know that a person can be fully entertained by the
music
 even though they do not understand the language because of the rhythm and tones, which convey through the
music
.
For example
, the song
which
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released by a band called one direction is worldwide popular because of its artistic background and orchestral support.
Moreover
, it is obvious that
music
 can
also
 bind together any age group
people
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 from any country because it can bring happiness and relaxation to the human mind. As we can see the modern generation today like classical
music
 from
90s
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 , and the same can be seen in
older
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the older
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 generation ,
where
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they
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love to hear hip hop or jazz
music
.
For instance
, in electronic
music
 ,concerts we can see the presence of elderly
individuals
 because they are getting amused or pleased by the
music
.
To conclude
,
it is clear that
music
 can bring peace and happiness to the
world
 and I strongly agree with
this
 because it can be expressed and felt by most
people
,
besides
 it can
also
 be easily conveyed through different aged groups
individuals
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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