You are planning a business trip to another city. You will have some free time to do some sight seeing while you are there. Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter explain the purpose of the trip ask about things to do and see in the city invite your friend to do something with you during your visit
Dear Simon,
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing this
letter to inform you about my upcoming trip to your city
next month.
As you know, I have been working in a multinational company as a human resources manager since 2018. Recently my company launched a project in Dhaka
, this
is because I will travel to your city
for two weeks to see the progress status of our new project in Dhaka
. Apart from the official work, I have planned to explore the beauty of Dhaka
during this
visit.
As far as I am concerned, there are many beautiful places in the capital city
of Dhaka
such
as the Burigonga River, the parliament house, the botanical garden, and so on. I am very much keen to visit these outstanding places with you, as you have been living in the capital city
for a long day. In addition
, I have decided to go to Jamuna Future Park and Old Dhaka
for shopping purposes and to have delicious food respectively.
You are highly requested to accompany me during this
visit so that we can spend a quality time by visiting the mentioned places.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding this
matter.
Yours lovingly,
FaisalSubmitted by faisalmahamood on
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task achievement
Although the general purpose of the trip was mentioned, there could be more specific details about the project which would enrich the task response.
coherence cohesion
Include more varied linking words to improve cohesion between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone consistently throughout the letter to match the writing tone required for IELTS General Training Task 1.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea to the reader, followed by supporting information or requests related to that idea.