You are planning a business trip to another city. You will have some free time to do some sight seeing while you are there. Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter explain the purpose of the trip ask about things to do and see in the city invite your friend to do something with you during your visit

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Dear Simon, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to inform you about my upcoming trip to your

city

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next month. As you know, I have been working in a multinational company as a human resources manager since 2018. Recently my company launched a project in

Dhaka

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is because I will travel to your

city

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for two weeks to see the progress status of our new project in

Dhaka

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. Apart from the official work, I have planned to explore the beauty of

Dhaka

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during

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visit. As far as I am concerned, there are many beautiful places in the capital

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Dhaka

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as the Burigonga River, the parliament house, the botanical garden, and so on. I am very much keen to visit these outstanding places with you, as you have been living in the capital

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for a long day.

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, I have decided to go to Jamuna Future Park and Old

Dhaka

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for shopping purposes and to have delicious food respectively. You are highly requested to accompany me during

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visit so that we can spend a quality time by visiting the mentioned places. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding

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matter. Yours lovingly, Faisal

faisalmahamoodMon Dec 25 2023

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task achievement

Although the general purpose of the trip was mentioned, there could be more specific details about the project which would enrich the task response.

coherence cohesion

Include more varied linking words to improve cohesion between sentences and paragraphs.

task achievement

Maintain a formal tone consistently throughout the letter to match the writing tone required for IELTS General Training Task 1.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea to the reader, followed by supporting information or requests related to that idea.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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