Online shopping is increasing dramatically how could this trend affect our environment and the kind of jobs required ?
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affects
environment
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affects
environment
such
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vehicles including trucks and bikes which are often used by delivery
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environment
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time-consuming
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are not
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lead
increase
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affect
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affects
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changes
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increase
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increases
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delivery
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number of delivery
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and it
require
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requires
of
deliveries. These Change preposition
for
delivery
jobs
are totally unknown in previous decades but these days it is quite famous among the
users. Correct article usage
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not
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their
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new buying trends. Correct determiner usage
these
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online shopping also
impact
the kind of job required.
In conclusion, virtual shopping not only Change the verb form
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affects
environment
by increasing transports
but Fix the agreement mistake
transport
also
by changing the
job trends.Correct article usage
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