Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In today's mechanical world, people are hardly finding time to relax.
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is causing society to burn out which is indeed resulting in lower productivity. Whenever someone finds some time to relax they try to watch something creative. These days there is not much interest in pursuing arts. Linking Words
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field. Many argue that the government should support those who want to pursue arts and others who do not. Linking Words
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The argument that government should aid people working in creative arts can be supported by the following reasons. Art generally represents the country's history through various means like dance, songs and music. Linking Words
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, in countries like India, there are more than 100 dance forms but the people who perform these dances are very few. There are a good number of tourists who visit to explore Linking Words
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, A recent survey shows that more than 30 per cent of funds allocated to art shows are not utilized in a proper way.
In conclusion, both arguments are valid. In my opinion the argument, the creative field is important and should be supported wins over the other.Linking Words
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