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Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment.Only governments and large companies can makes a real difference.To what do you agree or disagree?

#individuals #environment #governments #companies #difference
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In our modern life, many point out that
individuals
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 should accept the reality of
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 rather than try to combat it. In my opinion, I believe that certain levels of acceptance are pragmatic even though it is still important to take meaningful steps. Those who argue a passive approach point to the ineffectual impact of
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. The vast majority of problems related to
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 cannot be countered by individual action because they primarily involve corporations and governments.
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, companies that produce packaged foods,
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 as potato chips and instant noodles, create far more plastic waste and industrial pollution in one day than a single person will in their entire life. Governments can make a greater difference by enacting regulations to ensure that the methods of production and materials employed are more environmentally friendly. It
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 follows that the average person is justified in resigning themselves to the facts of
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 and living in an area
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 not especially affected.
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, the combined impact of
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 highlighting
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 will influence key policy decisions. The best examples of
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 are in European countries
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 as France and Denmark where green parties hold tremendous sway in government.
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 empower these political parties not only by voting but
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 through protests and consumer decisions. Even governmental bodies that are not as eco-friendly must take the environment into account when passing laws.
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, corporations are now cognizant of changes in consumer behaviour. Massive conglomerates
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 as Starbucks frequently advertise their environmental policies.
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 have demanded these reforms. In conclusion, the apparent influence of
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 belies their real influence on more powerful authorities.
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, concerned citizens must continue to speak out against the acceleration of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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