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Most people think that Money Can’t Buy Happiness . Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In our modern life,more and more individuals believe that nobody can't purchase happiness through wealth.From my way of thinking,
this
 type of opinion is not true.
This
 essay agrees that people may buy almost all things with
money
. On the one hand,human beings can buy their health with
money
.Because when people will be sick,they will go to a hospital.Of course, they pay a lot of
money
 for being healthy.
Besides
 that, individuals may save apply
time
 with their
money
.Take as an example,If people catch a bus,they lost their hour,
however
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 they catch a taxi they may save their
time
.Of course,these types of conditions will bring them a lot of happiness.
On the other hand
,it has a little negative side.Because we lost our
time
 and health for earn much
money
 and being wealthy.Our ancestors told us about
this
 situation:"Before we want to be rich,that's why we will work hard.After that by it we will be lost our
time
 and life". In the final analysis, many human beings say that being wealthy can't obtain contentment.From my point of view,we may buy a lot of beneficial things and sometimes many times through being a rich person.
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