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As countries become more developed, many fast food outlets move into the country giving local people greater access to fast food, advantage and disadvantage:

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people especially youngsters love fast
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 and the fact that has become easily available in the past few years has really changed the dynamic of fine
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 in and home-cooked
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. It certainly has its advantages and disadvantages which we will be discussing
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. With fast
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 being readily available, it has become easier for working mothers to grab and feed their children. Rather than waking up early in the morning and preparing
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. It has a variety of options
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, which makes it even more interesting, everyday new flavours and items. One does not have to worry about making meals when inviting people over. And it has become the most popular
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 for casual hangouts. Having said that, one cannot deny that fast
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 is not very healthy and daily consumption can lead to some very serious consequences. As the world is growing, our eating habits and quality of
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 have become drastically poor which led to hazardous illnesses. Back in ,time people used to live for 100 years and above, now life expectancy has come down to 70-80 years. The major reason is poor
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 intake. In conclusion,
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the expansion of fast
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 chains can be troublesome but individually one has to look out for themselves. In today's fast-growing world saving time has become essential for everyone but health is equally important.
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 things should always be consumed in the right balance.
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