The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
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The given bar chart displays how many times in 1990 and 2010 children aged 5-12, in one country, went from home to
school
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and back either by
bus
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, walking and by
bus
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, cycling, walking, or by
car
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as passengers.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the most popular form of
traveling
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to and from
school
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in 1990 was walking and that the
least
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last
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one was by
car
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.
However
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, in 2010, the
car
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mode became the most used. Regarding the year 1990, as just analyzed, most of the trips, slightly over 12
million
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, to and from
school
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were made simply by walking.
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, just over 4
million
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were with children as
car
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passengers and the rest approximately 20
million
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trips were either by cycling, a combination of walking and taking the
bus
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, and by
bus
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.
On the other hand
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, in 2010, the number of trips to
school
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and back by automobile rose to around 11
million
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,
while
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walking halve its popularity. Noteworthy, in that year, there were made only 2
million
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travels cycling, with a decrease of 4
million
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from 1990.
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