The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The bar chart illustrates differences in the choices of
residents
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when they purchased and consumed
coffee
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or tea in five Australian
cities
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. It is apparent that visiting a café for
coffee
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or tea was the most popular choice in
cities
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except Adelaide.
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preference was quite noticeable in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, with more than 60% of
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doing
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in the
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four weeks, respectively. As for instant
coffee
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, it was buyers’ favourite in Adelaide, where nearly half of them purchased it in the inquiry period.
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kind of
coffee
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was the second choice in the other four
cities
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, with the figure ranging from a low of approximately 46% in Sydney to a high of roughly 54% in Hobart. Compared to the former two choices, fresh
coffee
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was less popular in all
cities
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.
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was particularly true in Brisbane and Adelaide, where only about 34% of
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in each city drank it.
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, in most
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,
residents
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preferred going to a café to buy fresh
coffee
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or instant
coffee
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, and the gaps were quite wide in Sydney and Melbourne.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, coffee, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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