The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates differences in the choices of
residents
when they purchased and consumed
coffee
or tea in five Australian
cities
. It is apparent that visiting a café for
coffee
or tea was the most popular choice in
cities
except Adelaide.
This
preference was quite noticeable in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, with more than 60% of
residents
doing
this
in the
last
four weeks, respectively. As for instant
coffee
, it was buyers’ favourite in Adelaide, where nearly half of them purchased it in the inquiry period.
This
kind of
coffee
was the second choice in the other four
cities
, with the figure ranging from a low of approximately 46% in Sydney to a high of roughly 54% in Hobart. Compared to the former two choices, fresh
coffee
was less popular in all
cities
.
This
was particularly true in Brisbane and Adelaide, where only about 34% of
residents
in each city drank it.
Overall
, in most
cities
,
residents
preferred going to a café to buy fresh
coffee
or instant
coffee
, and the gaps were quite wide in Sydney and Melbourne.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, coffee, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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