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Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Currently
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 economic prosperity, travelling by
air
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 has become more and more popular. Some
people
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 hold the opinion that it should be cheap to help ordinary
people
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 have easy access to
travel
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further
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.
However
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, others argue that expensive
air
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travel
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 should be encouraged in order to protect the environment. I will discuss both views with some solid examples.
People
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 can
travel
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 to other
countries
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 by
air
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, gaining insight into foreign
countries
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 and obtaining better job opportunities. Some students,
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,
travel
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 to other
countries
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 where they can be exposed to different cultures and customs and put foreign languages in context.
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, they can improve their ability to foreign languages and have a comprehensive and deep understanding of local cultures and customs.
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, some
people
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 may
travel
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 to other
countries
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, and find a well-paid job.
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, some businessmen may run multinational corporations, so they need to
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 frequently. If the airfare rises, they may lose these opportunities.
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, the more expensive cost of
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 service may diminish the adverse effect of the
aviation
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 industry.
People
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 are reluctant to
travel
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 because of high prices.
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, the number of flights will be reduced and
aviation
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 exhaust emissions like carbon dioxide will experience a decrease, improving
air
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 quality and delaying global warming. What’s more, the contamination of noise and environmental destruction caused by the construction of airports and other
aviation
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 facilities will decrease dramatically. In a nutshell, my view is that cheap
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travel
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 is more reasonable because
people
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 nowadays are under huge pressure,especially those living in big cities, so they need to have a chance to
travel
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 to other places to get away from their daily life.
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, they can visit some tropical islands to enjoy local snacks rather than stay at home. But it is necessary for
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 companies to cut down the strain on the environment through technological innovation.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratic travel
  • Global diversity
  • Economic benefits
  • Service sector
  • Educational travel
  • International relationships
  • Carbon emissions
  • Global warming
  • Climate crisis
  • Overtourism
  • Infrastructure
  • Cultural heritage
  • Sustainable aviation
  • Carbon offset
  • Global inequality
  • Airline industry
  • Economic downturn
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