In recent years, online shopping has become increasingly popular. Some people think such a shopping method is beneficial, while others believe it creates more problems than it solves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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With the increase in technology development since
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years and
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Covid 19 online shopping has definitely gone to another level. Consumerism has been at its peak after Covid 19. Online shopping has its benefits
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flaws, which we will discuss in
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, essay. With the help of everything available just a tap away, millions of us are saving
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, energy and petrol, Without having to step out of our houses.
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gives us more
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to be productive and utilise it in a more efficient manner. Especially with the day-to-day groceries, the items you are aware of order become even more easier and reliable. It certainly has quite a few advantages in that regard.
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, scams have
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been observed with the rise of online shopping. There is no reliability if you will be receiving the same product as shown in the image or not. If the consumer is not satisfied nothing can be done about it, and returns and
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become a hassle. ,
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after the invention of mobile phones, an
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downfall in physical mobility has been observed. And shopping is one of those activities one would go out to do and
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enjoy that
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, which has decreased drastically. In conclusion, there should be a balance. I suppose anything
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tried and tested can be purchased online but things like clothing, shoes etc still require one to physically go out and shop and
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spend that quality
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doing it as it is sometimes considered to be a stress-relieving activity.
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