Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Many governments argue that economical boom and

progress

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are more important than any other topic in a country,

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others claim that other

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are as important as

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economics

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essay,

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, I agree with the latter group, I will explain both these

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of view . There is a main reason why governments prioritise economic

progress

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.

Governments

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financial matters are certainly based on economic

progress

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. if it does not go well , politicians will face a lack of budget. All the economical

progress

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,like taxes, supports

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the authorities

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authorities

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budget. To illustrate,

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year in Iran when the economy went bust, politicians issued a statement regarding their biggest concern about the lack of budget ahead.

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, some people are of the opinion that there is a wide range of

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that are the same important as

economy

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the economy

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. For society

topics

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such

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as art, literacy, science, culture and so on are important as well.

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, after the second world war most of the countries which were destroyed and damaged

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of

war

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the war

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decided to just focus on

economical

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the economical

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matter

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matters

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to bring the boom back to their country, on the

conterary

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contrary

, Vienna came up with a smart idea and decided to renovate its

theater

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and bring back the art which had been lost through the war and, after a couple of years Vienna could solve all its financial and

unfinancial

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nonfinancial

problems. Many authorities presume that financial

progress

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are

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significantly

important

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more important

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than other

topics

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in a country,

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some citizens do not think so. In my

opinion

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other

topics

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like art and science and so on are equally important