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Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

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It is undeniable that the emergence of the
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 has revolutionised the way individuals live over the
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 decades.
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 some
people
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 propound that
this
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 phenomenon has brought about the improvement of intimacy among members of society,
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others
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 argue that
people
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 have become more lonely than ever.
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 views. In my opinion, I believe that a balanced
living
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 should be taken into consideration. On the one hand, the
internet
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 has paved the way for
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better communication with
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 for many reasons. To put it simply, social networking sites have been
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 by netizens these days, which is important because they allow
people
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 not only to keep in touch with friends or families but
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 to make new friends who share the same interests globally.
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, in Thailand, citizens have joined a variety of online communities, depending on their preferences.
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, more and more
people
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 become friends and participate in a wide range of activities.
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, it is considered by many that the
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 is the leading cause of isolation among members of the public. To explain
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, as individuals have significantly relied on the
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, it has resulted in isolated communities since
people
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 are more independent from reality.
People
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 are likely to socialise with
others
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 less than ever.
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, in big cities, most dwellers live alone and have
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contacts
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contact
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 with their
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,
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, certain health problems can be the possible consequences. In conclusion, even though the
internet
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 has various benefits to humans when it comes to improving healthy relationships,
others
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 claim that it has put a great strain on
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 as many have become more lonesome. From my perspective, a balanced lifestyle should be taken into account.
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