Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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facilities are considered to be the most basic responsibility to be borne by any

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so, as a ,result a major chunk of the

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is spent on the same.

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, there are some people who believe

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an amount of money is better spent if it is used for

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education and preventive

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. I will discuss both the viewpoints in next paragraphs and try to come to a conclusion. On the first hand, good enough

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facilities are a must

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provide a sustained and peaceful environment. For ,example in times of pandemics like ,Covid-19 only those countries survived well and were resourceful in matters of medical

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. For illustration, nations with enough ventilators and hospitals to facilitate the citizens curbed the possibility of any kind of panic situation.

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budget

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of the state must be allocated to treatment to be

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to meet any exigency.

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, the fact can not be denied that " Prevention is better than cure". It is always advisable that one must prevent ourselves from falling ill as treatments for any problem may result in long, expensive and stressful. So

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must for the betterment of society run

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programme

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to promote awareness about human

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by including

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education in the syllabus at an early age so that students can imbibe better habits to keep them physically fit. In ,addition

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must run a programme for the prevention of some kinds of particular diseases

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, the problem of Malaria can be handled if implying preventive

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all the water reservoirs and storage are regularly checked and treated specially in summer.

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kind of preventive

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can actually help the

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reduce the

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and control the disease. In ,conclusion it can be said that despite it

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true that medical facilities are a must spend for but

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that preventive

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and

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education simultaneously can help one nation to achieve new records in better

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of the citizens with a controlled

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