The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main eatures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
that
the amount of four diverse substance that were reused between 1982 and 2010 in a special area.
Correct word choice
apply
Overall
, The graph shows four various materials which they use in the recycling area. Also
, the recycling rate demonstrate
paper and cardboard have Change the verb form
demonstrates
high
rate from 1982 to 2010. Add an article
a high
Moreover
, The plastics are end
of the graph so its has Correct article usage
the end
tiny
quantity, indeed recycling process has other materials Correct article usage
a tiny
such
as alimininium
cans, Correct your spelling
aluminium
glass
containers.
Correct word choice
and glass
Firstly
, The
paper and cardboard were Correct article usage
apply
reusing
have a big portion number is 65 % in 1982. From 1982 to 1990 the paper and cardboard Wrong verb form
reused
were fluctuated
but by 1990 started Change to the active voice
fluctuated
an
sudden increase to 1994, Change the article
a
next
period Correct article usage
the next
is gradually decrease
and by 2010 reached 70 %. Another material is the Change the verb form
gradually decreases
alimininium
cans in 1986 beganCorrect your spelling
aluminium
a
enormous growth, Change the article
an
then
in 2010 reached a peak quantity been just under fifty.
Secondly
, The glass containers were started in 1982 next period of time gradually down and been 40% in 1990. Moreover
, at
the next time wasChange preposition
apply
sudden
raised from 1994 to 2010. Replace the word
suddenly
The plastics
were one of the Correct article usage
Plastics
using
materials in 1990, almost not change any time remain steady between 1990 and 2010.Replace the word
used
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