The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main eatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below

illustrate

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that

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the amount of four diverse substance that were reused between 1982 and 2010 in a special area.

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, The graph shows four various materials which they use in the recycling area.

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, the recycling rate

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paper and cardboard have

high

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rate from 1982 to 2010.

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, The plastics are

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of the graph so its has

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quantity, indeed recycling process has other materials

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alimininium

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aluminium

cans,

glass

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and glass

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containers.

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paper and cardboard were

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have a big portion number is 65 % in 1982. From 1982 to 1990 the paper and cardboard

were fluctuated

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but by 1990 started

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sudden increase to 1994,

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period

is gradually decrease

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and by 2010 reached 70 %. Another material is the

alimininium

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aluminium

cans in 1986 began

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enormous growth,

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in 2010 reached a peak quantity been just under fifty.

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, The glass containers were started in 1982 next period of time gradually down and been 40% in 1990.

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the next time was

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raised from 1994 to 2010.

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were one of the

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materials in 1990, almost not change any time remain steady between 1990 and 2010.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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