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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
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The line graph shows the regular peak and minimal temperature in degree celsius,
while
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 the bar graph presents the number of rainy
days
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 in
Brisbane
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 bad
Canberra
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 monthly. In the first chart, it can be noticed that both the maximum and minimum temperatures in
Brisbane
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 are higher than in
Canberra
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. In
Brisbane
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, the climate is warmer from January until March and it becomes colder as it reaches the lowest temperature of up to 10 degrees Celsius in the middle of the
year
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.
In contrast
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,
Canberra
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 has a colder January
while
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 June to July is the coldest as it is almost reaching zero degrees celsius. The second data shows that compare to
Canberra
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,
Brisbane
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 has the rainiest
days
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 starting from the first quarter of the
year
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.
While
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 in the mid-quarter, it remains unchanged.
On the other hand
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,
Canberra
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 is quite opposite to that
Brisbane
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. There is more number of
days
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 with rainfall in the middle
year
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 and a constant of 6-8
days
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 for the rest of the
year
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. To summarize, it can be concluded that living in
Brisbane
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 is warmer than in
Canberra
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.
However
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, it is rainier there than in
Canberra
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 ,especially at the beginning of the
year
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words days, brisbane, canberra, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average daily maximum
  • average daily minimum
  • rainfall
  • degrees Celsius (°C)
  • anomalies
  • trends
  • geographic location
  • climate zones
  • seasonal changes
  • data representation
  • comparison
  • temperature range
  • weather patterns
  • statistical analysis
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