You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter; outline the situation propose ways to improve this situation request a meeting to discuss this
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention
regarding
the facilities Change preposition
apply
being
available in our college's Unnecessary verb
apply
sports
center
.
Change the spelling
centre
Firstly
, I would like to explain current
situation of our Add an article
the current
sports
center
. Change the spelling
centre
From
Change preposition
In
last
couple of months, so many Change the article
the last
sports
accessories were stolen from there. Therefore
, many sporty students leave our sport
clubs and Change the noun form
sports
joins
Change the verb form
join
another
famous Correct quantifier usage
other
sports
club. As a result
, our college's reputations
is decreasing day by day. To add on Fix the agreement mistake
reputation
this
, there are
no Change the verb form
is
any
security Correct quantifier usage
apply
person
available Fix the agreement mistake
persons
in
there to protect.
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apply
Secondly
, I would have some solutions regarding above
situations. One of them is to establish some locker systems in our Correct article usage
the above
sports
clubs to put some expensive things. Additionally
, we also
establish CCTV camera
Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
in
there, so we can see the live activities of it. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, we need to hire some body
builder security person who Correct your spelling
somebody
take
care Change the verb form
takes
our
Change preposition
of our
sports
club.
Finally
, I would like to meet you and discuss about
Remove the preposition
apply
this
matter further
. Can you please provide me your
availability in Add the preposition
with your
next
week or so? I will request Correct article usage
the next
you
for Correct pronoun usage
apply
in-person
meeting if possible.
I would appreciate it if you could look into Add an article
an in-person
the in-person
this
matter at your earliest convenience. Please do let me know if I can be of further
assistance.
Yours faithfully,
Milav SoniSubmitted by writing7 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite