You use public trasnport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport autoroties. In your letter include: why public transport is important to you what problem you face suggest what can be done to improve public transport

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the bus service that I and the general public is using for our work. As my work is out of Kitchener, I have to take the bus on a daily bases in order to go to work. It is totally regretted to say that the condition of the

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is quite unsanitary and bad. These public

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are not anymore suitable for the general public because most of the bus' windows have built up a yellowish layer, as it seems that these were not even clean for decades. Owing to

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, it is

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very hard to see outside of the

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, the seats of these

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have a foul smell, which makes commuters not sit on these seats. In order to improve the condition of these

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you should introduce some new sits and

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clean the windows twice a week. I would really appreciate it if you could resolve

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issues at your earliest convenience,

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, I will not be left but to take some legal action against your public transport service. Yours faithfully. Karam Kaur

karampalvirk21Sun Mar 26 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

196 words

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You use public trasnport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport autoroties. In your letter include: why public transport is important to you what problem you face suggest what can be done to improve public transport

The Greeting

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