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Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio. How does media affect the society? Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

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There is no denying the fact that the
media
 are a crucial part of people's lives. Devices
such
 as television and radio have
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 influence on the way how humans think and act.
Hence
, the question is whether the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks
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 On the one hand, society is in touch with the
media
 all day long. To cite an example, the majority of workers listen to the radio every single time in the car in the morning to know the latest news about live traffic updates and accidents on the road. Apart from that,
this
 is really useful
due to
 the fact that people have time to find a way to skip the problems on the way and be on time at work. Another point worth
nothing
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online streaming channels there are plenty of riveting and thought-provoking programs that are really mesmerising and joyful for elderly people
as well as
 children.
Last
 but not least, society feels really annoyed when they are watching a movie and at the most suspenseful moment an advertisement shows up. As evidence, really frequently
such
 commercials are about medicines and dietary supplements. I totally agree that the
media
 has more advantages
due to
 the fact that, from the internet and radio population can know gripping news about the world and politics and advertisements are only an addition.
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 everything that has been stated so far,
it is clear that
 the
media
 has a huge influence on human life and daily activities.
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