Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays some professionals say that students in elementary
school
should start learning a second
language
rather than in high
school
.
This
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this
topic and prove that there are more merits than demerits.
To begin
with,
to learn
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language
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earlier is more efficient to develop the student's
language
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.
Furthermore
,
according to
the research regarding
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brain, learning
language
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a language
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younger age affects
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basic
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of
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because it is under development, especially speaking and listening abilities.
For instance
, as a matter of fact, my friends who started studying English in primary
school
has better
pronounciation
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pronunciation
and listening skill than people who began studying English
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secondary
school
. There is a big gap between people who learnt in primary
school
and in secondary
school
.
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, learning
language
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earlier, especially in elementary
school
has
advantage
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.
On the other hand
, learning something additional reduces opportunities to study another subject.
In particular
, the students might miss chances or not be able to focus on learning their national
language
.
For example
, in my country, some researchers say that the
abilities
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of using
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Japanese
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language
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and weaker in
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generation
due to
focusing on sparing
thier
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their
time for learning English.
Hence
, there
are
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some
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unavoidable
disadvantage
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to
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foreign
language
as
second
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language
.
To conclude
, learning
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language
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early age has
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advantage
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advantages
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for young people's
language
development.
However
, the students might have to decrease their time or lose their opportunities to learn another subject
such
as their national
language
.
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