Topic: your neighbour has written to you to complain about the noise from your flat

Dear Madam I am writing to apologise for all the noise coming from my flat over the past few days. I invited my friends for just a week. I tried every possible way to
made
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them come to my home.
This
is because whenever I asked them
come
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to my home their parents did not give permission to come. But that
time
they allowed their children to have
a
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fun with me. And they took
my
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me
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up on an offer. They were
couch
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a couch
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potato
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. Because they watched
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the movie
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movie
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all the
time
and
listened
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music very loudly. And
also
they were party lover person. As you know during these days we had a lot of small parties too. I think they have the
time
of their life all the
time
. Just they were always like that. But now everything
ok
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and nothing to write home about. I hope you will accept my apologies. Yours faithfully.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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