The chart below give information about the high-speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries 2001 and 2002.

The chart below give information about the high-speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries 2001 and 2002.
The graph compares the high-speed continuous
internet
connection of households in five different
countries
in 2001 and 2002.
it is clear that
the
number
of continuous
internet
connections
in the
USA
increased significantly from 2001 to 2002,and the
figure
for the
percentage
change in Britain increased higher than the other four
countries
. in 2001,the
number
of continuous
internet
connections
in South Korea was 122 which is higher than the other four
countries
,
meanwhile
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the
number
of continuous
internet
connections
was 93 in the
USA
.
by contrast
, the
number
of continuous
internet
connections
in the
USA
increased to 251.1 in the 2002 and overpass the
number
in South Korea.
while
the
figure
for the
percentage
change in these two
countries
at 170 in the
USA
,at 20 in south korea . from 2001 to 2002, the
number
of the high-speed continuous
internet
connection in the other three
countries
increased much more slowly .in Germany,the
number
from 3.4 up to 5.616, the
figure
for the
percentage
change in Germany was 80 ,and the
number
was 3,6 in 2001 up to 7.92 in Switzerland.the
number
increased from 3.6 to 7.92 in Britain in 2002,
however
,the
figure
for the
percentage
in Britain was the largest among these
countries
.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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