You are going on holiday and have just remembered that your aunt lives in one of the cities you will be visiting. Write a letter to your aunt. In your letter: • Tell her about your holiday plans • Ask if you can stay with her for a portion of the trip • Explain how you will make it up to her

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Dear aunt Lillian, My company offer me an arrangement for a London visit as a bonus trip. After the news Suddenly your name pops up in my mind that you are living there for a long time. I am looking forward to seeing you during my trip. I will land at Heathrow airport on the 25th of April at 3.00 AM. There are some famous infrastructures and museums I have shortlisted in my itinerary. My stay will be only for six nights, and Returning flight will be on the 1st of May. As I have booked the Hotel near to your accommodation, but I want to spend some time with you at your convenience. I can spare about one to two nights if you are free.

Otherwise

, we can meet at any coffee shop for a moment. I know you have a hectic schedule, especially on weekdays. But one weekend is one during my trip.

In addition

, there are so many items from my mom that I must surrender to you. Cannot wait to see you. I will be waiting for your reply. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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