These days, mobile phone and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinion about the essential role of phones and the

internet

in people`s life connect with other individuals socially.It goes without saying that socializing way between persons on the

internet

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The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.

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modern era

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phones and social media are played a vital role in people`s life.

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electronics

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connection

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with the

internet

which supported social apps

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as Instagram, Tik Tok , Facebook and as well.

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online

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format

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of offline and not only teaching area

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also

in terms of communication apps assist people

easily

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interact

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with each other and

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benefical

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friends in other countries. Another factor to consider is the drawback of mechanics among individuals. Many children would not recognize their game time forgetting

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themselves from

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devices.

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, these days most types of apps

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harmful effects on health as

bad

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issue with the eyes.

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obtained more information

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materials by using automatic systems. Taking everything into consideration, the

internet

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negative and positive effects but I am strongly concerned

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the rightness

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devices depends on a

person

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action and finding

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significant advantage

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society.