You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is differrent from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour your town to the writer of the article. Write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter because I have read your article about town centres in our country. I am a person who had lived in different towns in Turkey and now I live in Istanbul. I have experienced cities over 10. So, I think your opinion about the similarity of town centres is not correct.
Although
I do not agree with all points, some points in the article are right. For example
, towns in the same region can be similar. But not at all.
First of all, every region of Turkey has a different culture. That can be seen in buildings. For example
, in Safranbolu, there are mostly brown and wood houses which are 2 floors. But in Istanbul, buildings are more than 10 floors and it is also
more crowded than in Safranbolu.
I have an offer for you if you accept. I want to introduce my town to you and maybe I can change your ideas about my country. If you accept, I will organise a tour which will include 10 different cities.
Regards.Submitted by iremsaribass on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite