Some people think it does not matter if a professional sportsman or sportswoman misbehaves on or off the field, as long as they play well. What is your opinion about this?

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In recent decades, professional athletes often misbehave in a stadium or a public space. Whether their
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based on high-performance records should be understood or not has been hotly debated among people. I strongly agree with the view that professional athletes must behave well as they are being watched by numerous individuals, including children.
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issue by using examples to support ideas and demonstrate points. On the one hand, as professional athletes are generally most teenagers’ role models, their
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will bring negative effects on children’s growth by allowing them to mimic the actions.
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,
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during a field can affect social conflicts between nations.
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players stimulated South Korea’s anger by showing up a red flag which was disrespectful to them during a football game, and it became international tension between the two nations.
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, it is critical for them to behave well which is regarded as professionalism.
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, some people worry about a tendency in which their
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ought to be acceptable and understandable because of their social contribution
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as economic growth or donations.
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, it is just a mere performance in order to sustain their own popularity by attracting their fans with strong actions.
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, if they perform well by winning a game, their own and the nation’s fame will be enhanced with a winning prize which somehow will be returned to a community as social responsibility.
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, their
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can be accepted as performances if they are not illegal. In conclusion, even though they play well, they have to become an example by behaving well
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • role model
  • influence
  • integrity
  • tarnish
  • reputation
  • consequences
  • inappropriate actions
  • morale
  • unity
  • negative environment
  • sponsorship
  • brand image
  • ethical considerations
  • athletic performance
  • respect
  • fairness
  • values
  • behavior
  • impact
  • public attitudes
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