While some people consider global warming to the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, there is a strong argument that global warming poses a big issue for the environment and the global population.

However

, some people think

deforestation

has more serious effects on the earth; in my view, they are

both

big

issues

that require discussion and debate in society. First of all, global warming is a result of how easy our lifestyle has become.

For example

, transportation methods have been developed a lot and many household appliances were invented. These changes made our life more convenient than before.

On the other hand

, that increased the amount of carbon dioxide and it has accelerated global warming. It is said that polar bears have already been suffering from a shortage of food and homes

due to

less

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glaciers and more and more endangered animals have been reported. (were)

Secondly

deforestation

is necessary for urban

developments

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development

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and exports to other countries;

whereas

deforestation

destroys forests, which makes global warming worse, and the environments where animals can live. The effect of

deforestation

is more obvious and quicker than global warming. In terms of

this

aspect,

deforestation

is said to be the worst problem on the earth.

However

, it can be said that

both

interact with each other.

For instance

, climate

changes

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are affected by

both

issues

and

this

has increased the frequency of floods, typhoons and wildfires. In conclusion, some people think

deforestation

is more serious than global warming but from my point of view,

both

global warming and

deforestation

are urgent

issues

that require immediate attention and these two

issues

are deeply related to each other.

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Greenhouse effect
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Sea levels
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Biodiversity
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Paris Climate Accord
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