While some people consider global warming to the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is a strong argument that global warming poses a big issue for the environment and the global population.
However
, some people think
deforestation
has more serious effects on the earth; in my view, they are
both
big
issues
that require discussion and debate in society. First of all, global warming is a result of how easy our lifestyle has become.
For example
, transportation methods have been developed a lot and many household appliances were invented. These changes made our life more convenient than before.
On the other hand
, that increased the amount of carbon dioxide and it has accelerated global warming. It is said that polar bears have already been suffering from a shortage of food and homes
due to
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glaciers and more and more endangered animals have been reported. (were)
Secondly
,
deforestation
is necessary for urban
developments
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and exports to other countries;
whereas
deforestation
destroys forests, which makes global warming worse, and the environments where animals can live. The effect of
deforestation
is more obvious and quicker than global warming. In terms of
this
aspect,
deforestation
is said to be the worst problem on the earth.
However
, it can be said that
both
interact with each other.
For instance
, climate
changes
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are affected by
both
issues
and
this
has increased the frequency of floods, typhoons and wildfires. In conclusion, some people think
deforestation
is more serious than global warming but from my point of view,
both
global warming and
deforestation
are urgent
issues
that require immediate attention and these two
issues
are deeply related to each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Greenhouse effect
  • Industrial emissions
  • Sea levels
  • Extreme weather events
  • Biodiversity
  • Carbon emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Paris Climate Accord
  • Carbon cycle
  • Soil erosion
  • Water cycles
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Reforestation
  • Sustainable forest management
  • Indigenous communities
  • Localized impacts
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