In many countries, people live longer and longer. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?
In today's society,
People
want to celebrate more birthdays in their life
. Although
living more life
is thought by some to be a good experience for them, other folk
think that it can be detrimental to Change the wording
folks
community
. In my opinion, I think that Add an article
the community
this
development can have more benefits for people
compared to any disadvantages it might bring.
Admittedly, there are some minor disadvantages of living more by crowd
. Add an article
the crowd
Firstly
, at the age after
eighty Change preposition
of
people
's medical expanses
Correct your spelling
expenses
are increase
year by year. Change the verb form
are increased
are increasing
Therefore
, A dependent child cannot enjoy their hobby and stop to spend money in
extra things. Change preposition
on
For Example
, if elder
community suffer from Correct article usage
the elder
dangerous
disease like blood problem Add an article
a dangerous
then
he
might change their blood Correct pronoun usage
they
evey
six months. Correct your spelling
every
Secondly
, in some household, the elder public have
old-fashioned behaviour. Change the verb form
has
Moreover
, their
below generations are not giving too much Change the word
the
attentions
to them. Correct your spelling
attention
As a result
, they decided to leave their home and buy some
new Correct determiner usage
a
house
.
Fix the agreement mistake
houses
Nevertheless
, despite the problems above, I believe this
development could bring more benefits to society. One important benefit is that current generations gain knowledge of old culture and maintain and pass over it to next
generation. Correct article usage
the next
For example
, today's people
learn how to celebrate Diwali from elder family
and pass Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
knowledge to future generations. As a consequences
, their culture Correct the article-noun agreement
consequence
remain
Change the verb form
remains
live
. Correct your spelling
alive
Furthermore
, someone can
get love and care from older Correct pronoun usage
who can
people
is unforgettable. For example
, if children are
suffer from illness Unnecessary verb
apply
then
elder
community take care Correct article usage
the elder
them
so correctly. And I thinkChange preposition
of them
,
it is Remove the comma
apply
best
medicine for them to recover instantly.
In Conclusion, in some countries, Change the article
the best
family
are eating healthy food and doing exercise regularly. Fix the agreement mistake
families
As a result
, they are living more numbers of years. Moreover
, some folks believe that they are burden
Add an article
the burden
of
their Change preposition
in
life
. I think elder nation are base of our life
and they are great
source of learning Add an article
a great
new
aspect of Add an article
a new
life
, so this
development far outweigh
any of Change the verb form
outweighs
minor
disadvantages it has.Correct article usage
the minor
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