Today, many people do not know their neighbors. Why is this? What can be done about this? (0226)

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As it is clearly observed that these days, many
people
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living in modern society do not know their nearest
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neighbors
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. There are many underlying
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why
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. By all accounts, many
people
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don’t tend to be interested in other
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for many
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with, families have become nuclear families,
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makes
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have individualism because
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couldn’t learn the value and culture of living together from the big family. On top of that,
people
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become tired when they make
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neighbors
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because the tendency for frequent relocations to other places, which have a lot of infrastructure for many
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like educational purposes, is increasing compared to the past.
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, with increasing individualism and frequent moving,
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have less
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in
nearest
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people
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.
According to
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research by the government of South Korea, many young generations show
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low
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in their
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compared to older generations. With all due consideration, there are many ways to make
people
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become interested in their
neighborhood
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. First and foremost, local community groups should help
people
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to activate their interaction by providing a space to gather
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neighbors
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.
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, making a space in a local community to share their own talent freely can lead to having
interest
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and interacting with
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neighbors
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.
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, making a community group caring for their children and sharing
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educational information with other
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neighbors
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can raise their
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the
neighborhood
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.
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but not least, if the government hosts an event regularly for gathering local
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, it can help to raise the chance of having
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interest
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in local society by meeting periodically. In conclusion,
it is clear that
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many
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have become less interested in their
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neighbors
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because of several
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, and there are diverse solutions to solve
this
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phenomenon.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • community engagement
  • social isolation
  • neighborhood watch
  • local initiatives
  • virtual interaction
  • privacy concerns
  • resident mobility
  • technological advancements
  • social media influence
  • work-life balance
  • busy personal schedules
  • community events
  • local residents
  • social interaction
  • community ties
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