The maps give information about a university sports court.

The maps give information about a university sports court.
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The two maps show compared a university sports court before and after some adjustments to the layout between 1990 and the present.
Overall
, it can be seen that
this
place has experienced some major alterations, including the addition, replacement and rearrangement of many of the amenities.   It can be clearly observed that the park and the car park on the left-hand side of the building have been removed. In these places, currently, is a basketball court replacing the former and four tennis courts displacing the latter.
Moreover
, the main facilities have now been enclosed - the swimming pool has present been converted from an outdoor to an indoor one.    At deeper inspection,
while
the positions of the coffee shop and reception remained unchanged - located next to the pool, the changing room which had previously sat next to the reception has now doubled in size and been shifted to the opposite of the pool.
Lastly
, the two tennis courts on the south side of the building have now been turned into a fitness centre.
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