Topic from Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households
The first line graph shows the percentage of
families
owning a washing machine
, fridge
and vacuum cleaner at home
between 1920 and 2019, while
the second figure illustrates the number of hours
that a family engaged in household
chores in the same reporting period.
Overall
, there was a significant growth of families
owning three electrical machines at home
, although
the ownership
of a washing machine
has declined gradually throughout the period. Moreover
, the time spent on household
chores has dropped over the 99-year duration.
Looking at the details, the washing machine
was the most popular household
appliance in 1920, with 40% of families
reported to have owned one. This
figure continued to surge, until 1960, there was a 30% increase in families
reported having a washing machine
at home
. The ownership
of a washing machine
fluctuated between 60% to 80% from 1960 to 2019.
Interestingly, there was no household
reported to have a fridge
in 1920, however
, it then
experienced a dramatic jump to 90% of the families
reported having owned one in 1960. Since then
, all households reported having a fridge
at home
. The ownership
of a vacuum cleaner followed a similar trend where starting with 30% of households owning the machine
. By 1980, it was tripled what it was in 1920. The ownership
of a vacuum cleaner ended at the same level as the fridge
at 100% in 2019.
Additionally
, the hours
spent on household
chores fell gradually, from 50 hours
a week in 1920 to 20 hours
a week in 1960. After 1960, the number of hours
spent on housework fluctuated between 20 to 10 hours
per week.Submitted by joewingpun1992 on
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