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Topic from Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households

Topic from Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households
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The first line graph shows the percentage of
families
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 owning a washing
machine
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,
fridge
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 and vacuum cleaner at
home
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 between 1920 and 2019,
while
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 the second figure illustrates the number of
hours
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 that a family engaged in
household
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 chores in the same reporting period.
Overall
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, there was a significant growth of
families
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 owning three electrical machines at
home
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,
although
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 the
ownership
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 of a washing
machine
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 has declined gradually throughout the period.
Moreover
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, the time spent on
household
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 chores has dropped over the 99-year duration. Looking at the details, the washing
machine
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 was the most popular
household
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 appliance in 1920, with 40% of
families
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 reported to have owned one.
This
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 figure continued to surge, until 1960, there was a 30% increase in
families
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 reported having a washing
machine
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 at
home
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. The
ownership
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 of a washing
machine
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 fluctuated between 60% to 80% from 1960 to 2019. Interestingly, there was no
household
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 reported to have a
fridge
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 in 1920,
however
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, it
then
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 experienced a dramatic jump to 90% of the
families
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 reported having owned one in 1960. Since
then
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, all households reported having a
fridge
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 at
home
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. The
ownership
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 of a vacuum cleaner followed a similar trend where starting with 30% of households owning the
machine
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. By 1980, it was tripled what it was in 1920. The
ownership
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 of a vacuum cleaner ended at the same level as the
fridge
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 at 100% in 2019.
Additionally
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, the
hours
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 spent on
household
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 chores fell gradually, from 50
hours
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 a week in 1920 to 20
hours
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 a week in 1960. After 1960, the number of
hours
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 spent on housework fluctuated between 20 to 10
hours
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 per week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, machine, fridge, home, hours, household, ownership with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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