Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A problem of the current era is the decline of public
health
. While
adding more sports
facilities
may promote the number of people
exercising, I believe that it should take more effort to deal with this
issue.
On the one hand, building more sports
facilities
like a gym or sports
park can increase sports
participation and physical health
. Because many people
are suffering from an office lifestyle, sitting on a chair all day could cause some diseases. Moreover
, people
may need somewhere in their neighbourhood where they can participate in activities conveniently. In that case, this
approach can lead people
to exercise regularly and maintain health
to avoid those diseases. Nonetheless
, this
method barely be effective for people
who have motivation but have difficulty using sports
facilities
.
On the other hand
, I believe that people
could be more successful to
gaining a healthy life by other measures. Change preposition
in
Firstly
, educating the vital benefits of health
in every person's life may bring some changes in physical well-being. If people
understand the proper knowledge, they could reduce the risk of an illness automatically. Secondly
, the government should impose amercement since lots of the high-fat food products are familiar in our society. When people
get these kinds of unhealthy food easier, they could get more health
problems associated with being overweight, such
as heart disease and hypertension.
In conclusion, increasing sports
facilities
can be a good solution for improving public health
. However
, I do prefer that having the essential information and famulating the rule would be better to reach a healthy life.Submitted by tghycc3032163 on
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