Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many individuals say that the government is to be held accountable for obesity in young kids.
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this
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, it is a fact that government has a part in the Linking Words
overall
health of their constituents ,especially the young ones. Linking Words
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, it should be a shared responsibility between the authority, Linking Words
parents
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Parents
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as youngsters tend to imitate and absorb anything that they can witness from an adult. Use synonyms
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are very active in doing physical exercises might be enticed to do the same activity as those young ones who see that kind of attribution from their elderly. Use synonyms
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, they get to develop a healthy lifestyle that can be very beneficial Linking Words
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In addition
, the people in a Linking Words
community
have a vital role in promoting healthy and ideal body weight among young kids. Use synonyms
For instance
, leaders in those areas can conduct campaigns and seminars to every kid in their town about eating fruits and vegetables, going to bed early, participating in social clubs and most of all, as much as possible trying to stave off consuming meals coming from fast food chains and restaurants. All these combined efforts can push those Linking Words
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suitable and advisable for their age and height thereby preventing obesity.
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To conclude
, I hold the opinion that it is not the sole accountability of the government but Linking Words
as well as
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parents
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community
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children
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community
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also
take part in promoting healthy body weight for those Linking Words
children
through campaigns and seminars. Use synonyms
Therefore
, with the help of those shared efforts, it aids to alleviate the occurrence of obesity in every child in a particular Linking Words
community
and country.Use synonyms
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