You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many individuals say that the government is to be held accountable for obesity in young kids.

However

, I oppose

this

opinion.

To begin

, it is a fact that government has a part in the

overall

health of their constituents ,especially the young ones.

However

, it should be a shared responsibility between the authority,

parents

and

community

.

Parents

should serve as good examples and role models in the eyes of their

children

as youngsters tend to imitate and absorb anything that they can witness from an adult.

For instance

,

children

whose

parents

are very active in doing physical exercises might be enticed to do the same activity as those young ones who see that kind of attribution from their elderly.

Consequently

, those

children

will find interest and soon engage in activities

such

as physical exercises and active play.

Furthermore

, they get to develop a healthy lifestyle that can be very beneficial

in

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their

overall

health.

In addition

, the people in a

community

have a vital role in promoting healthy and ideal body weight among young kids.

For instance

, leaders in those areas can conduct campaigns and seminars to every kid in their town about eating fruits and vegetables, going to bed early, participating in social clubs and most of all, as much as possible trying to stave off consuming meals coming from fast food chains and restaurants. All these combined efforts can push those

children

and youngsters to develop a healthier and more ideal body weight

that is

suitable and advisable for their age and height thereby preventing obesity.

To conclude

, I hold the opinion that it is not the sole accountability of the government but

as well as

by the

parents

and

community

. As

parents

can be good role models and examples in the eyes of their

children

.

In

addition

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the

community

can

also

take part in promoting healthy body weight for those

children

through campaigns and seminars.

Therefore

, with the help of those shared efforts, it aids to alleviate the occurrence of obesity in every child in a particular

community

and country.