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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many individuals say that the government is to be held accountable for obesity in young kids.
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, I oppose
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 opinion.
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, it is a fact that government has a part in the
overall
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 health of their constituents ,especially the young ones.
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, it should be a shared responsibility between the authority,
parents
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 and
community
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.
Parents
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 should serve as good examples and role models in the eyes of their
children
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 as youngsters tend to imitate and absorb anything that they can witness from an adult.
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,
children
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 whose
parents
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 are very active in doing physical exercises might be enticed to do the same activity as those young ones who see that kind of attribution from their elderly.
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, those
children
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 will find interest and soon engage in activities
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 as physical exercises and active play.
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, they get to develop a healthy lifestyle that can be very beneficial
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 their
overall
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 health.
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, the people in a
community
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 have a vital role in promoting healthy and ideal body weight among young kids.
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, leaders in those areas can conduct campaigns and seminars to every kid in their town about eating fruits and vegetables, going to bed early, participating in social clubs and most of all, as much as possible trying to stave off consuming meals coming from fast food chains and restaurants. All these combined efforts can push those
children
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 and youngsters to develop a healthier and more ideal body weight
that is
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 suitable and advisable for their age and height thereby preventing obesity.
To conclude
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, I hold the opinion that it is not the sole accountability of the government but
as well as
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 by the
parents
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 and
community
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. As
parents
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 can be good role models and examples in the eyes of their
children
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.
In
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addition
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 the
community
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 can
also
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 take part in promoting healthy body weight for those
children
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 through campaigns and seminars.
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, with the help of those shared efforts, it aids to alleviate the occurrence of obesity in every child in a particular
community
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 and country.

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